(This is Sadie's entry for the Reading Rainbow contest. I just want to say that the original draft of this story was way more violent than this draft. I encouraged her to edit it for children.)
Once upon a time, there was a unicorn. That unicorn was named Rainbow. Rainbow lived in the forest, the rain forest!
One day, there was a hunter.
The unicorn felt mad! The unicorn knew just what to do. The unicorn charged, with the horn pointing straight to the guy’s chest. The hunter felt mad!
But the unicorn turned, going straight into a tree. The hunter laughed. Then, the hunter got too much of the unicorn’s funniness from the unicorn, so he went away.
The hunter ran and ran, and Rainbow felt funny.
Monday, March 23, 2009
Friday, March 20, 2009
Beverly Hills Chihuahua
Once upon a time, there was a Chihuahua.
And there was another one, named Papi. The first one was named Chloe.
She was from Beverly Hills until she got lost in Mexico.
Papi came to save her, and also her owner, that was just taking care of Chloe.
She left clues out for them to find a booty, and Papi found a booty. Rachel got surprised that he found a booty!
Chloe fell in a mud puddle and lost a booty!
Chloe was on a train.
They have found some dogs that was going to help. And they were hired, and they got homes.
And Chloe fell in a pit. And Papi was in a cage when she was in the pit. And Papi was in the cage. And Chloe have rescued Papi.
Chloe first did not have her bark, and then when she was in the pit, she got her bark. And she barked some times, and she defeated the bad guys.
The End.
And there was another one, named Papi. The first one was named Chloe.
She was from Beverly Hills until she got lost in Mexico.
Papi came to save her, and also her owner, that was just taking care of Chloe.
She left clues out for them to find a booty, and Papi found a booty. Rachel got surprised that he found a booty!
Chloe fell in a mud puddle and lost a booty!
Chloe was on a train.
They have found some dogs that was going to help. And they were hired, and they got homes.
And Chloe fell in a pit. And Papi was in a cage when she was in the pit. And Papi was in the cage. And Chloe have rescued Papi.
Chloe first did not have her bark, and then when she was in the pit, she got her bark. And she barked some times, and she defeated the bad guys.
The End.
Wednesday, March 11, 2009
The Knight Vs. The Firesnake
Once upon a time, there was a firesnake. And that firesnake eats every kind of people thing there is. And people, food, and people. It eats dogs, glow stations, lamps, cats, toys, and all the other people things. It crunches like it is eating people. It eats bags, clothing, paper, printers, computers, collars, eyes, and chairs.
The knight comes to the firesnake realm. And the firesnake sees the knight! He (the knight) got frightened and the firesnake shot fire at that knight. The knight had armor so he did not get killed. And then that firesnake shot fire at him harder! When he did it harder, the armor broke in two pieces of every piece of that armor. And then that knight was unprotected. So, he got dead. That is the end.
The knight comes to the firesnake realm. And the firesnake sees the knight! He (the knight) got frightened and the firesnake shot fire at that knight. The knight had armor so he did not get killed. And then that firesnake shot fire at him harder! When he did it harder, the armor broke in two pieces of every piece of that armor. And then that knight was unprotected. So, he got dead. That is the end.
Sunday, March 8, 2009
Dad's Bike Race
Today, all of us have went to a bike race with Dad. There was no kid bike race, but Benny rided around and came back and went around again. And I got really hot. I really got hot. So, if it's freezing there, I would need something hot, like a heat vent there. Now, Dad has got a tenth place, out of 48.
(more pictures here)
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Underdog Saves the Day
Once upon a time, there was a village far away. There was a horrible, horrible storm. It wrecked up the whole village and the whole castle. It was a candy kingdom. The castle had peppermints and candy canes and gumballs and some chocolate and a dog came. He saw the village all broken up. So he just did something that the village needed him to do! He fixed the whole village up very fast.
And you have got to hear the violin song of it! I, Sadie, just made it up. The end.
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
Red Priest Review
The Red Priest guy. Last night, this guy was the recorders, and me and Mom saw a thing which we don't know, and he kept playing it and the violin guy which is not on this picture has been doing the wind on a flute! I loved the beginnings, and I loved super-loved the wind sound. I just loved that part. The end!
(Red Priest is an early music ensemble, and this is Sadie's review of their show, "Pirates of Baroque").
Friday, December 5, 2008
The Firesnake
There once was a firesnake. It was so tall. In fact, it had a baby. The baby was so so small. It can fit under a rock. Just like crabs. It has to grow a horn. And it has to grow two firebreaths. Until it just grew and grew AND GREW AND GREW until it was big and tall, and it can duck down and get neat, and take the dog's meat! And it went like, "Oop, sorry." It wasn't really mean. But it's so so dangerous that the dog was carrying his meat inside the house. Also, a mighty dog will be scared of it. And it will be brave, but it will still be scared of the firesnake.
The firesnake lives at the jungle. The end.
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